Assalamualaikum Wr. Wb
Hello friend.........!
My name is Nisrina Akmaliyah, you can call me Rina. I was born in Gresik, 22 May 1996. So, I am 12 years old. My hobby is watching TV, reading, and playing computer. My idea is teacher.My favorite food is chocolate, and My favorite drink is ice cream.
I have a parents. My father name is Achmad Kamil, he was born in Surabaya, 5 May 1969, he is a sectretarias in cooperative. My mother name is Lilik Hamidah, she is a teacher in SD Muhammadiyah Sidayu. I have three sister, the first sister name is Mar'atul Firdaus,she is student in Senior High School in Sidayu, the second sister is Qurata Ain Sa'baniyah, and the third sister is Adila Akmaliyah she is studend in SD Muhammadiyah Sidayu.
I live in Bunderan village, my home is simpel and not big, in front of my home there are many flowers. I am water the flowers everyday. In my living room there are many books. In my house it has living room, three bedroom, and a bathroom.
Wassalam Wr.Wb
Assalamualaikum......
BalasHapusYour writing is very good. But in paragraph 1 you write "My hobby is watching TV, reading, and playing computer". Acctualy is "My hobby are watching TV, reading, and playing computer. And i like your design.
THANK YOU....
Wassalamualaikum.......
Hello Rina......your blog is good.but,you write favorite.actually favourite.
BalasHapusyour blog is good.
BalasHapusbut your write studend actually student and your write favorite actually favourite.
Assalamualaikum.......
BalasHapusHi....Rin..!!!!
Your blog is G...O...O...D...!!!
Wassalamualaikum......
Assalamualaikum..........
BalasHapusHi....Rin..!
your blog is GOOD and, I like your blog
Wassalamualaikum.........
Assalamu Alaikum Wr.Wb.
BalasHapusRina, your blog is good. Your blog never mistake, too.
Wassalamu Alaikum Wr.Wb.
Assalamu'alaikum Wr.Wb
BalasHapusHello Rina........!!!
your blog is good but in paragraph 2,you write my father name,my mother name,the first sister name.Actually,my father's name,my mother's name and the first sister's name.
Sorry if my comments there is mistake.please pardoned.thank you.
Wassalamu'alaikum Wr.Wb
Assalamualaikum Wr. Wb.
BalasHapusYour blog and your writing is good. But, in paragraph 3, you write "In my house it has living room, three bedroom, and a bathroom" actually you write "In my house it has living room, three badrooms, and a bathroom".
Thank you...
Wassalamualaikum Wr. Wb.